LOL. Poor Cloud, tied to the bed. I can just picture the face of the poor bastard that opened the dor next. Wonder if Yazoo cleaned him. Heh. Good work, Elkica. Good work.

yay write more~ the cloud revenge 8D

"...Nothing. There was nothing. Not one ** monster, not even one ** pathetic little one. Nothing. Nada. Zilch..."

LOL ! That was one hot story ! :D

Oh, I knew this was going to be devilishly delicious even when you were just drafting up the story at Icy's. Lovely outcome indeed! :D (Now all we need is to see what Cloud will do now... XD)

Wow that was a great read and i really needed it.

But who are the characters which animation are they from?

My, this is good! Awesome characterisation (I really mean that: you got everyone so perfectly down, with so many little typical details).

I loved the idea of Loz beating Kadaj because he touched him, he, in a way, is still a kid... And Kadaj´s obsession with Sephiroth seemed so very plausible! Of course one would want to know more about the person that enslaved and almost destroyed them!

And I so squealed about Yazoo trapping some poor guys with his charms to beat them up later XD He´s so slick and cunning, I love that!

"How dare Cloud to turn away from him, didn’t he know that he was dangerous, that insanity ran in his family?" LMAO. omg, who would know that better than Cloud?! But sulky Yazoo is so adorable!

Hahaha, and he´s such a selfish, pushy bottom! Delicious^^ Poor Cloud, he seems a little overwhelmed by the situation *snickers*

Good thing he left Cloud like that, I can so see him doing it and smirking that evil smile of his about it!

I really, really do hope you do more of it!

I really like it. It's really good. Can't believe that Yazoo left Cloud tied up. ^-^