Wow...hot, hot, hot, hot, hot! 'Course, I have no shame in admitting I have a bit of a thing for Galvin, lol - great fic! :D

I liked this a lot - I think you got their 'voices', and the way they are both trying to get the upper hand, very well indeed.

I do wonder if Galvin might have done a bit more to make her feel at ease at the beginning, though? But apart from that - great. And I loved the line about an 'all-you-can-eat buffet'.

*grins*

Heh heh, I like this very much...

Typical Galvin, constantly thinking about the smiting!

I really like Galvin/Ruby, they make quite a cute couple.

The last line is great...aswell as being very promising...

OMG NO don't say thats the end please do more i really want to know what happens next i like the idea of Galvin and Ruby being together as much as Mina & Ruby being together its just so cute great job and please do more or i'll cry

aw man, the beginning 'My Mum warned me about men like you,' just about killed me. so funny. I think you captured the ruby-galvin banter really well here, so well done. Plus I also like the idea of drunk pictures to blackmail Luke with. Or maybe that's just me being evil :)

Great one shot.

I'm so pleased you wrote a sequel to your other story! I really enjoyed this. More good banter, and the kiss in particular was a nice bit of writing - hot yet subtle. I love the way Galvin can't even go on a date without having to whip his gun out and smite something. :)

I'm surprised by how much I miss these characters (maybe more the potential of them than what we actually got) and this definitely brought them back to life again.