Hi!
I really like your storie. This is unique for me because I have never read something like this (on FF). I really enjoy how you are blending in real historical facts with the storie. By the way, thanks for having all those footnotes :D

I can't wait for you to update! (^.^)
*C-Q

For starters, ulqyfangirl27 IS my real penname. I'm just too lazy to log in XD Dont worry, though, I added you to my computer favs =) So, I LOVE your story so far, my favorite stories are the ones with slowly developing relationships, especially the ones that go from hate to love! I can't wait till you upload the next chapter, I'll know cause I check the NejiTen archives just about every day. Anyway, big fan of yours.
~Ulqyfan

yeah! you're not dead!

loving Jiraiya in this chapter, he's such a firt

Oh my gosh, its been so long, when i first read this i knew i had to read it to the very end then... re-read.
Please update soon, (very soon) i cant wait!

Ah!
It's been awhile! But welcome back, hun! lol.
I seriously love Neji and Tenten. Neji is quite a sweetie...If only, if only. =P
Now for me to go rescue my dying fanfics. lol.

-TR

Hinata is starting to feel insufferable to me now. In actuality, Hinata is not supposed to be present at the treaty meetings. She's not there as an ambassador, neither is she an assistant. Update!

I like how Neji is sso pursuing Tenten. :) haha usually it's the other way around with Tenten good naturedly pestering him. This is a cute story. ^^ Hopefully you will find a way to incorporate the rest of the naruto cast soon. mainly Sasuke and Naruto?? haah I was wondering if you were going to make on the emperor, but Mutsuhito does seem to be the more reasonable choice now that I think of it. Keep up the good work.

lol I love how you made Hinata such an annoying self righteous **.

Thanks for updating. i lyked dis chapter. bt 1 question: why is hinata such a B*h. no offense tho.

See, I love this chapter! Because it holds so much promise of what's yet to come. You're delaying action, but you've supplied the right about feed for your audience to keep trailing. Does that make any sense? I think I'm babbling. I love the humour thrown in too with Tenten. :P The sarcasm certainly makes it all worthwhile!

Very cute, though I find the luck of anything actually happening a bit of a turn-off. A lot of this appears to be internal monologue, back and forth between Tenten and Neji and while it is nice, I'm still not seeing much development in terms of plot or very great detail outisde of 'this is coming and she/he is feeling this way now, due to this'. It gets a bit dull, but I think your dialogue is great. I love the character's interactions verbally, but not so much physically. Other than speaking and moving between places, there's not much going on. There's never very much you describe and I'm guessing this is probably because you've written your story with only a few very vague ideas in mind.

Maybe I shouldn't be so harsh, because I've mentioned your brevity once before, and liked it since it works well when you're feeding us some character details. Neji being 19 for example and wondering about his youth. (I think that was an earlier chapter!) Try not to become disheartened, I am still a fan!

You actually brought up some of what I mentioned through the characters - the sexism; why Neji irritates her. I enjoyed it quite a lot and I'm sorry my reviews never hand you anything helpful. I am still reading and hope you don't think you've lost an audience. I will ask though, why Tenten says, "I remain here in Japan." They're in China, right?

And there's something outside the time period you're writing for that you might like to read: 'Wild Swans' by Jung Chang. You've probably heard of it, it's a popular book. Pretty interesting, too. There's mention of a few Chinese traditions that you might like to look up. Like foot binding, concubines and their perceived inferiority and the very lavish traditional weddings. Women were carried through the streets to their husbands in a sedan chair. If the woman were to walk it would basically be a sign he barely loved her. I don't know how relevant that is, but just some things to consider! I mean it seems to me that women in this China basically lived to prepare for their wedding day. And it was never about falling in love! Tenten would never tolerate that. :P

Tell me, did you really do your research well? Because there's no way that the Sakura blossom can last for 3 full seasons till winter. Most of them don't even last till the beginning of spring, unless they're winter sakura. Tenten's reaction is too much, is there a reason for it? Update!

aw...poor neji. though i dont quite understand why tenten was mad about the gift...just because its gonna die? o.O

SWEET! I liked the ending too: Give it up for TENTEN, THE TAKES-NO-BS, HEADSTRONG, KICKIN' NEJI'S ** WITH HER AWESOME BACKHAND WOMAN!

(Inner: >:D This chapter made me smile XP)

And what's Catonese? Like a branch form of Chinese or something, or some universal Asian language?

lol, ShikaTema makes you "wither". XD
Awwz, I guess you were right. But then again.. you're the authoress. Course you are :P... unless my guesstimating skillz pwn your plotline XD

(Inner: *gets on a panda hoodie with ears on the hood and ** slaps a Neji dummy* WHOOT, I'M EMULATING MY CURRENT HERO! XD jk, my hero's still Vin Deisel, with all his sexy **-kicking)

... O-o not gonna comment on that...
Anywayz, bye KNO! Hope senior year blows by!
Review ya later!

awsome you updated!

sucks to be you, i've finished school for good, where do you go?

loved the smack at the end but we all know she's happy to see him there