Loved these two chapters! Keep up the good work!

That was so cute.

Aw, isn't this funny and cute? I'm not generally a het fan, but Tex/Church I do approve of. As for the most recent chapter, that being chapter 12, it's because she loves you, Church! Well, write more soon.

Oh no, now I'm buring! That's much worst then other things burning! Now its chasing me! Bad fire go away!

And for the hell of it: I demand cookies!

Please be well

Mrfipp

I kept imagining little chibi soldiers.

Tucker's right; Always fill in a plotthole

Yeah for interpretative dance!

Please be well

Mrfipp

How does Donut know its spring? The weather's always the same?!

Please be well

Mrfipp

I'm really enjoying this stuff! You're really good with the characters, and getting to what they are all about. Keep em' coming!

So that's where the shovels went...

I liked Caboose's little 'eulogy' at their funeral.

Did it mean they got married or something?

Please continue

Mrfipp

pretty good, can you have Washington and Delta make a appearance?

Oh wow. This is awesome, Maiden! I liked chapter 4, I haven't seen a High School AU in any RvB fics so far, that was nice.
Oh, and nice play on O'Malley's last name (Arthur-Ives), I thought that was funny. Although, why Beth for Tex's last name? I didn't get it.
Very nice work! Keep it up!
-MusicGamer

This stuff is great! Please keep them coming!

I do wonder if Omega had anything to do with their break-up in the first place.

Please continue

Mrfipp

A high school AU? Never seen that in ANY RvB fic, and the parody of ep. 1 was funny.

'What's all this about calculus?'

Vic as VP? HA!

Arthur and Beth? Why those names? Wait, I think I can understand Beth.

I wonder what you'll do with the others; like Andy, Junior, ooh! The Meta!

Please continue

Mrfipp

Hehe, very interesting! Please continue!
Keeper-of-the-Cheese