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fiesa
2009-08-24 . chapter 19
Hey!

I haven't been around lately... I apologize. But you finished the story in the meantime! That's great. I promise I'll read the next and last chapters as soon as possible, but right now, my life's a mess and I gotta run again. But, because reading calms me down, I'll try to come back as soon as possible! Maybe even today.

Wow, I'm so glad Maddy's okay. She really has her parents' determination, she'll be fine! And now, of course, everyone can see Lil's a great mother.
It was kind of clear whom Lucy, the nurse, meant when she said "Lil's father" had called. I'm also regarding John Stillman as her father, he's always been there for her, he cares for her as if she was his own daughter... They're a family, all these detectives! And Lil will be back working with them soon, I bet.

I like Dr. Klein, too, and she and Lil maybe might become friends once. Maybe. Surely...

Okay, now I'm definitely late! Sorry. See you soon!

isa
Ebony10
2009-08-20 . chapter 27
"Scotty hurried after her, and the other five pushed each other out of the way in their haste to get the best viewing spot for what they knew was about to unfold." LOL, I could totally picture this. :D

Awe, that last line got me. I'm all choked up. Can't believe it's over!! ...but we can always expect more from you, right?
Ebony10
2009-08-20 . chapter 26
“I swear, Scotty, if you ask me one more time...”

lol. Loved this chapter. They're all so adorable. :D

And Tracie Thoms is amazing.
Ebony10
2009-08-20 . chapter 25
LMAO! So many great lines in this chapter.

Manning squeezed her eyes shut. “Mental picture, mental picture, mental picture...”

lol, and Lilly telling the story with her as a princess and Vera as a "humble manservant"!'

And the parting shot: Lilly’s ideas had the history of getting people in trouble. Or shot.
Ebony10
2009-08-20 . chapter 24
What the hell? How did I miss all of these chapters. Damn school...okay, done being bitter. Great chapter! Off to read more!
ChristinaAngel
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Scotty helping Lilly with the baby, like understanding how she must feel being left alone at the base, was really sweet.
The fight about the baby was good, especially when Scotty took the time to listen to what Lilly has to say cause he jumped to conclusions before. Maria was very perceptive which saved Lilly and Scotty some embarrassment.
I think the ages of the sisters are a little off, in your first fic of this trilogy when you were wrote about the song 'Conversations with your 13 year old self' you said Lilly and Chris were only four years apart but now they're seven. Just thought I should mention it, especially if I'd gotten it wrong.
It really freaked me out when Scotty left, and it's really unlike him to leave especially without telling Lilly but good reason for it happening. Liked Nick's reaction, just getting it all off his chest.
Poor Scotty, that must have been horrible with a kid and a woman who looked like Lilly. I loved how Lilly protected Scotty from all the people who want to tell him off and helped him with his nightmares. The gift was the cutest way for Lilly to tell Scotty that they're having a girl.
Did not expect Manning to have a kid as her big secret, he's sounds really cute.
Scotty's proposal was really good, and really cute.
I liked how Lilly and Scotty turned the tables on Kat and Vera for helping with their relationship, also Maddy and the trouble she had at birth was good but I'm so glad she survived. The proposal at the end was really good and child Maddy was really sweet as well as having the whole team wrapped around her little finger. Great trilogy!
lulubell6
2009-08-13 . chapter 27
“I wish all the people in the world could have somebody,” she said softly. Scotty rubbed her arms, resting his chin on the top of her head.

“Somebody?”

“Somebody like us.”

WOW! Couldn't of asked for a more perfect ending!! I am soo sorry it has taken me forever to review, been so busy just moved. Anyway I am so completely sad this story is over. Made me laugh, made my cry and so many other emotions. You really are talented, your writing is amazing and I love all of your work. Congrats on the marriage and I hope your honeymoon was incredible. Take care and I look forward to reading and re-reading your stories. :)
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 27
This is… this is the last chapter?? :o No!! :S:S *sobs*
Oh, Maddy is a cutie, just like her parents :D
LOL at Maddy patting Vera’s cheek.
LOL at Scotty joking about nap time :D
LMAO at the story of Prince and Princess :P
Oh! I loved that proposal :P :P:P
I really did love the proposal! :D
The end was perfect!!
I think I’m gonna go cry in the corner *cries cries cries*
I’m so gonna miss this story!
*keeps crying*
But I’m so happy for them
*keeps crying*
But I’m gonna miss it
*stops crying*
But this means you can write another LS story *grins*
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 26
Go Nick and Kat!!
Go Lil for doing what she did!
Ohh, Scotty is a cutie-although we already knew that :D
This quote: “Victor Hugo once said that ‘The great acts of love are done by those who are habitually performing small acts of kindness. We pardon to the extent that we love. Love is knowing that even when you are alone, you will never be lonely again.’” Reminds me of Criminal Minds and I don’t know why…
LOL at the new pool :P
Ohh, cute Veronica and Darren :D
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 25
Uhh ohh… poor Miller! What did Vera do? Tsk tsk…
“I can’t believe I let you into my bed!” That was a mental image I didn’t need, though…
Ow… tsk tsk at Nick…
I really like Lil helping Vera.
And Scotty all cute with Miller :D
LOL at the “pull a Lilly”: P
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 24
One word: Hot! I don’t know what else I can say… oh yeah: Go Scotty!
Scotty was jealous indeed! Very very jealous! That was a great LS moment!
LMAO at Lil making fun of Scotty :D:D *giggles*
Scotty daddy! I can’t believe it yet… Daddy Scotty… it suits him :D
*keeps reading*
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 23
Poor Lil sobbing!
Scotty is so… cute helping her, aww!
LOL at Will teasing Vera and Miller :D
LOL at Miller and Manning against Scotty :P
Uhh ohh, Scotty shouldn’t have said that to Ellie…
Scotty is pretty good at lying like that.
I’m crushing on Scotty!! I’m crushing on Scotty!!
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 22
Oh oh oh!! You told me you were going to write a shirtless Scotty with the baby! And you did!! YAY! I’ve been drooling since the moment you told me btw :D:D *keeps mental image*
Maria is subtle “what you'd look like in a wedding dress” *cough*
Oh yeah, I’d also marry Scotty… who wouldn’t?
Uhh ohh at Maria, Mike and Scotty and yay at Ben.
LOL at him saying “Mama, mama! Papa won’t feed me!”
Poor Scotty and Lil being interrupted *cough*
Go nookie time!
PatryTrusky
2009-07-31 . chapter 21
Sorry I took so long to review, but Real Life has been a pain in the a*s. I hope everything is alright :D
Tsk tsk at Vera changing Miller’s calendar :P
Lilly is pretty stubborn…
Vera with Maddy! So cute…
Lil kicking as*es again!!
Poor Lilly not trusting herself to be on her own with Maddy! :S
I’m proud of Scotty too! :D
Ohh, Scotty so cute saying they need a new mirror :D
*keeps reading*
Rhonda Roo
2009-07-30 . chapter 27
This is for chapters 24 thru Epilogue...dang I have missed alot. Packing to move is terrible...my computer moving days before me is worse. I am technically moving tomorrow but I came to our townhouse today because I have homework due... I'm doing this first.

Anyway that was wonderful...what a great ending.

I can't wait for your next story. Maybe now I will have time to work on mine since our internet is finally up and working.

So how is everything? How are the new Mr. and Mrs. doing??
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