Wow, that was interesting - reading this was like being on a high with him and trippy as hell XD Different. I like it! *^_^*

~Tekko

Wow, that was brilliant!

It was fast-paced, intense and slightly crazy- in a good way! :)

The ending was clever, too. I love it when authors such as yourself tie everything up at the end, and somehow, that's what you did in this story.

I love the way you wrote the last few paragraphs- with the use of punctuation dwindling as the story went on/as the drug kicked in more. It really changed the pace into something racy and it was really effective.

Great job- you're really inspiring.

- MCNR

THAT. THAT... THAT WAS INTENSE.

The repetition was awesome. The constant connections and comparisons, similies... they were treats~ I really, really loved this. But, then again.

I love all of your work.

So really, no surprise there.

Awesome.

Um. Still not completely coherent yet, but I'll give it a shot.

IT'S LOVELY. The changes you made were perfect and, well, the new ending just made me stare at the screen and wonder why the hell I can't write like that. Seriously. I don't remember if I told you this before, but I especially loved this part: He’s fucking high he has hold of the most beautiful boy he’s ever seen he’s lost control he’s lost everything he loves it keeps it up.

God, the way his thoughts run into each other in that stream-of-consciousness narrative; your style changes story from story and I'm always amazed by your versatility and the way you write 'serious' stories just as well as your more humorous ones, and. Um. This was gorgeous. Thank you very much for the dedication!

so you are the same Michele who can't write serious stuff? pfft! this is really good, and like always you're far too hard on yourself. it's not confusing or difficult to follow or any of those things - the way the writing changes as the way Axel is feeling changes works perfectly.

i like this new direction that your writing is going in very much. also, you're very mean for not posting everything instantly XD

But it wasn't confusing! It was brilliant^^ Plus I totally love the stream of consciousness narrative mode. And this was the first fic I've seen written that way so kudos to you for that:)

That was cute :)

WOW~ This really took a lot out of me Mi-chan. *it's nearly 2 in the morning and my eyes are playing tricks and the letters change*

I love the rapid pace of Axel's thoughts, it makes it so much more realistic (not that I would know). I was scared the cops were gonna find them (bright lights coming through the window).

An excellent story, and don't worry, this doesn't romance drug use at all. Just Axel's addictive personality. X3.

~*KA*~

(best when read while listening to Kaito's part of "Alice of Human Sacrifice")

Right, it's NOT an addiction. Though it is an addiction to me, and your wonderful writing that's seriously like a drug to me now. Awesome job!

LOL YOU DIDN'T KNOW I WAS READING THIS BECAUSE I DIDN'T TELL YOU I WAS READING IT AND AHAA! I SURPRISED YOU!

-cough- I'm perfectly fine, thank you. Anyway.

I absolutely love how this is written -- the confusion and the thoughts running together, it's amazing. I love Axel's thought patterns. And the funny thing is, I can actually see him doing something like this .. becoming so enamored by something he claims not to be addicted to, but needing it all the same, and then Roxas comes along with what he isn't addicted to and gives him something ELSE to .. "not" be addicted to. It's fantastic. I love it. And you. -3-

I really, really wish you had more confidence in your writing. This is brilliant. Write more, woman! You're amazing!

Woah. Just... Woah.

In a good way of course :) Or better yet in an awesome way, or in a 'spectacular-amazing-wonderful-wowjustwow way'

Yeah, that fits :)

Man. That was a little hard to read, but MAJOR KUDOS on making the language really convey and reflect the atmosphere and the setting and all. I mean, stuff that's written like this...sometimes it's done to be artsy, and it doesn't FIT. But with the drugs and the story the way it is it DOES fit this time, and you pull it off GREAT. DAMN. NICE. Woo, I love Axel's characterization too. LOVE IT. Still perfect with that obsessive streak, even when he's not in control. *drooldrooldrool*

At the same time, I'mma dork soo...I HOPE THEY DO FALL IN LOVE I HOPE I HOPE LOVE LOVE FOREVERR! XD XD XD XD

Anyway, really well done. Excellent. CANNOT WAIT TO SEE MORE OF THAT STUFF YOU'RE KEEPING FROM US! XD

that was awesome!
but the question is: does roxy stay with axel in the end?
i'd like to hope so :D