This is an excellent piece of work. I'm surprised this story has so few reviews.

I don't know why but I laughed at the mention of Vaan's androgynous face. A lot of people regard that with disdain although I'm not sure that was your intention.

I love your Larsa, he's absolutely wonderful. I'm secretly hoping he gets a happy ending--but what would it be? Hm...

I hope you write more of this.

Love the story so far - pity that it hasn't gotten many reviews yet! But that may be because FFXII fandom has quieted down as of late...

Anyhow, I hope you write more soon!

Aw wow! That was a brilliant start to this story! I was gripped immediately by the details in your writing and the plot dragged me on through all four chapters! You have written the characters so well and you made me so happy when I finished the first chapter!

The second and fourth are my favourite as they read like masterpieces! Such a vivid and beautiful vision of Basch appeared into my head from your words and I'm simply blown away!

I love this story, I love your style and I strongly encourage you to continue this! For the sake of my sanity.

Thank you so much!