 Spider-Fox93 2009-10-27 . chapter 4This is a very good story, but maybe you could update soon, because whenever I see "To Be Continued" on a fanfic, it pulls me in and makes it so that I can't wait for the next chapter. So please updated real soon. Also I saw the drawings about Natsuko on deviantART, and I've got to say that you have a talent for drawing. So keep up the good work. |
 keyblade-03 2009-10-22 . chapter 4Excllent story you have here. Very creative and well writen. I see its been awhile since you updated, but I hope your not giving up on this story. Again your doing a awesome job here so keep it up. I really hope you update soon.
Keyblade |
 burakkupansa 2009-06-02 . chapter 3Hey, I like this story so far, so please update soon! I'd love to see what happens next! |
 burakkupansa 2009-06-02 . chapter 1Great chapter! |
 burakkupansa 2009-06-02 . chapter 4Great story! |
 Zaku Magician 2009-05-28 . chapter 4I Love the idea of Them Fusing...But...Next update? :D |
 Iwannabeahero 2009-05-22 . chapter 4Please update this story. I really like it. |
 Onihikage 2009-04-07 . chapter 4Funny business? Come on, this is Naruto here! He'll actually have a reason to peek on his teammate now! And since he knows they were in love with him, well... ^/_\^
Well, judging by the "shorty" comment in the second chapter, I guess this is in part 1. I'm rather hopeful Natsuko will go with Naruto on J-man's training journey - that idea isn't done enough in NaruHina fanfics (or Naruto x HinaSaku, as this is XD) in my opinion.
*Really* looking forward to seeing more, seriously! And perhaps longer chapters, if you can manage them? |
 Onihikage 2009-04-07 . chapter 1Alright, I found it! *is Onihikage on dA*
Well, it's quite a good first chapter, though if this is after the TS, then Naruto's slightly OOC - he wouldn't be that sore with her being team leader - he knows he's not the smartest guy around.
Onward! |
 davethedark 2009-03-30 . chapter 4update soon |
 shyguy1818 2009-03-30 . chapter 4awsome |
 minniemousemom 2009-03-30 . chapter 4great update |
 gilmaxter 2009-03-28 . chapter 3Wow awesome chapter...
and yet i wouldn't put off for that to happen in manga lol
keep up the good work, this story is great! |
 shyguy1818 2009-03-28 . chapter 3awsome dude |
 GraysonPaladin 2009-03-28 . chapter 3I have been waiting till this chapter to reveiw, I need some conformation to waht will happen to Sakura and Hinata. So far you story is look good, I really like the primse so far, I have only seen on other story wil Sakura and Hinata fusing together, Kamon772's "Sakura, Hinata, and a Pair of Porta Earrings". I really what Shizune told Naruto about the techinic, about teh new girl will be Sakura and Hinata but at the same time not, that is perfect. Anyway keep up the excellent work.
Yuor Obedent Reader,
Paladin13, TftSA II: Miss Midshipman Tsukino |