It's so cute! I want to hug it but it's just words on my screen so I can't!!
Seriously, I love it! I couldn't stop smiling through the whole thing, ahaha..
Keep on writing awesome stories my friend!
(more exclaimation marks for fun~ !)

This story is soo sweet and you made Harley sound soo sweet even though he can be really annoying at times he still is pretty sweet.
The fact that May and Harley are now boyfriend and girlfriend is nice but of course she will get sick too and she has spent a lot of time with him while he has been getting better so you need to say about that in the next chapter and she will need to tell the others about Her and Harley or they won't be happy when they find out the hard way.
Thanks again for a great story and I will review when you have put another chapter on.
Till Next Time
Queensunset

I luv it <3 Although I was kinda ** from the grammar problems. ^ ^()

D'aw. This is so cute! Cookieshipping is absolutely adorable, yes~
One thing I noticed while reading was the grammar - the dialogue often didn't have punctuation at the end, and you sometimes didn't separate the speakers with a new line. Nothing too hard to fix, and a pretty common mistake. Just thought I'd point it out.
As for the sickness, I thought it was fine. You never stated what he was sick with exactly, and overwork and such makes your immune system vulnerable to all sorts of diseases. It sounds like he got was some type of nasty cold-type thing, which is best treated this way because there's nothing much you can do about colds.
Anyway, really nice story! ^^

There are a few times in one's life when one just wants to bash one's head against a wall.
This is one of those times.

Not because the story was rubbish, but because I hadn't seen it yet! Long story short, CookieShipping's my OTP.

I really, really loved it.
Great idea, executed well!
A couple of things though;
'He sighed inwardly. This would do at all.' You mean 'wouldn't', right? Watch out for those typos, hun!
Also, grammatical error in the title; NEVER USE APOSTROPHES WITH PLURALS! I put it in capitals so you and anyone who looks at this review will remember; I'm really not trying to be rude or anything. ^_^ It should be 'Three Thank Yous', although I realise that looks really weird XD
The title fits the story well, which is good. My titles always turn out weird...
Very cute, all the way through, and you managed to keep everyone in character, too! Great!

I'm going to add this to my CookieShipping community, if that's okay ^_^
Lu xX

SQUEE! SO CUTE! You have now converted me to shipping these two!

Oh...OHMIGOSH, A COOKIE SHIPPING FIC!

Now, this was just plain fluffy, feathery and whatever you might deign to call it, but just kyaa~! I stopped at the season before Diamond and Pearl, because D&P was just too crappy for me (DAWN'S FAULT). Although Contestshipping seems so much more favoured, I guessed that I still am a closet Cookieshipper and hopefully will get more stuff like this. Loved it, thank you!

~Whisker

Oh! This was just absolutely adorable! It's been a while since the last time I watched Pokemon, so I'm going to have to start catching up now, thanks to you, lol.

Excellent work, as always. Not that I need to tell you that, but, I will anyway. 8-)

-Rachel