 pandora-of-the-south 2009-11-10 . chapter 3interesting twist you have put on things! Can't wait to read about the confrontation with Kouga and Naraku (Sess)...will Kouga notice that it is not Sess and tell Ayame?? Can't wait to read more...keep up the good work and update soon please |
 miss yuyu 2009-11-07 . chapter 3 This stoery is so good! I love how fast pace it is going! update soon! |
 Sessho's Gal 2009-11-02 . chapter 3another great chapter update soon |
 Sessho's Gal 2009-11-02 . chapter 2great chapter |
 Sessho's Gal 2009-11-02 . chapter 1great chapter |
 Tales Reign 2009-10-28 . chapter 3SWEETNESS! ugh i hope kikyo dies quickly i really don't like her |
 Komori 2009-06-03 . chapter 1 Cool. Though this story has extremely long chapters, I can really see this becoming promising. The history portion of the story was needed for you to show what demon she summoned and expalin how important it was. Wit a beta, this will be really really good, but it's good nonetheless.
There's one thing that I think may need a little addition to this chapter... When u first mention this Tsubaki person, it's when Kagome sees her staff... I think you should give Tsubaki a little more history or something before she sees the staff so the reader can understand and fully feel that this is a special/once in a life time moment for Kagome to come across it. I was like, "Wait... Who the heck is Tsubaki?" lol. yeah you give a lettle history about her after Kagome gets her staff, but I think there should be some beforehand too, that's all.
I enjoyed the twist at the end with Kagome's summon. it was sorta expected due to her dream she had (and the fact that all your stories on here are Kagome/Sess fanfics), but it was still surprising. I look forward to finding out more about Tsubaki's current whereabouts and the true connection between her and Sess, despite being summoned by Kagome. Love ur story so far. Took me a week to read, and I know I have another chapter to go, but it's a great story, Ms. Laure. |
 pandora-of-the-south 2009-05-12 . chapter 2I don't know which is worse...having to apologize to everyone you know and love for lying or having to witness murders? ok I give which is worse again! LOL keep up the great work and looking forward to Kagome's downfall...will someone try to take her out for her deceit? |
 Tales Reign 2009-04-06 . chapter 2^_^ I love this story! So Awesome can't wait for the next update! |
 Arc-an Angel 2009-03-28 . chapter 2lol just great. Amazing story with an interesting plot, can't wait for more. |
 Sesshomaru2004 2009-03-27 . chapter 2nice keep it up |
 The female Sesshomaru 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Way to go Kagome... way to screw up everything with your lies. |
 Lady Giselle 2009-03-26 . chapter 1I like the story so far and i thought this first chapter was a great beginning of the story as well. The stave/demon summoning ritual kinda reminds of the a few of the rituals (e.g. wand picking, house stationing) from harry potter. However, there is a twist to this which i do like the way that sesshoumaru comes into the story. i am wondering thought what will happen with tsubaki's staff that was used by kagome and if she will need to give it back. Also, since it was tsubaki's staff that summoned the demon will sess belong to tsubaki? will kagome be reprimanded or punished for taking tsubaki's staff? it will be interesting to see how kagome will be able to tame this formidable demon that she had summon and what will be sess's reactions to kagome trying to tame him. looking forward the next chapters! |
 Sesshomaru2004 2009-03-26 . chapter 1nice keep it up |
 Tales Reign 2009-03-25 . chapter 1SO FrIGGIN AWESOME!@@! GIVe me more! ^_^ |