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Reviews for: The Logic of Passion
Joyfull Scroll
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
*Huge Grin*

Prowl should look towards 'stress relief' more than he appears to! Love this idea of pairing.
Abandonment Personified
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
The "one nation under Prowl" bit did make me chuckle, actually.

Ok, I'm not the best at writing reviews, but let me try...

First off, I think it needs a little backstory. Why does Prowl want to go after Bluestreak so much?

And I think Bluestreak was a little... I don't know, unresponsive? I might not be reading closely enough, but it felt kind of one-sided, like Blue didn't really know that Prowl was doing anything to him.
genechan
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
very cute!1
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