|Reviews for Evading The Orbit|
| thepinktabby 9/2/12 . chapter 4
Wow. I love it! I would Implore you to write more. :-) ill even pimp ya out on Facebook lol. So...what happens next? *wink*
| LaTriceMississippiQueen 8/11/12 . chapter 4
Y u stop?
| DemeRain 7/25/12 . chapter 4
I'll say one thing about this story, this is the most real, unfettered, tangible and conflicted relationship I've read in fanfic. I'm sad there isn't more, but I thank you for sharing.
| wordyma 7/22/12 . chapter 4
I wish you had written this longer so I could enjoy the tension even longer! Well written, so smooth. Great characters. Thank you.
| Doubleamom 7/2/12 . chapter 4
| dazzlingrockstar 1/13/12 . chapter 4
Edward was really raised up old school. I feel bad for him, it can be extremely difficult to break away from the feelings attached to such an upbringing. I really hope u have a HEA for these two men, cos damn I've read some sad fics with Jasper and Edward. Is ur entire story going to solely be in Edward's POV?
| jel19 1/11/12 . chapter 4
More? Why did you stop? this is an excellent and interesting story, very well written and it is a shame not to finish it. Please begin where you left off and finish your story.
| Elfarmy 8/6/11 . chapter 4
I miss this story. Any update soon?
| The.Dragonfly.Lover 7/25/11 . chapter 4
I'm quite pleased with how that ended, how Edward decided to veiw things;though I did find myself wishing for more.
| The.Dragonfly.Lover 7/25/11 . chapter 3
I know I'm a year or two late, but your descriptive is good—I don't like descriptive for the most part, but was really pulled in here. It fit the scene!
| The.Dragonfly.Lover 7/25/11 . chapter 2
I was a bit affronted when Edward nearly said what he did—but I do know it wasn't you. However, I have some soap over here, if he'd just step a little closer…!
| The.Dragonfly.Lover 7/25/11 . chapter 1
I'm quite enjoying this—glad I decided to dig for a new read!
| xnxdx 7/14/11 . chapter 4
With only 4 chapters in you have me completely hooked to this story. I noticed that you haven't updated in a long time, is that to say that you've given up on it then? You're a fantastic writer regardless.
| tired617 7/1/11 . chapter 4
Really enjoying this story! Will you be updating it?
| Cyndee 6/22/11 . chapter 4
Your writing style is extraordinary. I do wish you would finish this fic. I have read these four chapters several times and I am amazed at the emotion and pictures you conjure as I read. Please finishit would be SO worth it. By the way, yours is the BEST first kiss I have ever read in any fic :)