hey love the story why did you stop it was just getting good please continue i wanna know what happens next

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I never once though this could happen? How did you think of this? Why hasn't anyone else? Are you some Imagination God Or something? I bet you are.

I love the story and how things are going. I counted a totaly of at least two mistakes.
"He's agreed to do out evil bidding." Richie grinned...
See? Out is suppose to our. Dont you just hate when fingers slip? I do. LOL

But other then the very very small none noticible mistakes, theres none. Good for you too! Virgil and Rich are awesome to read with Ben. I love how extremly playfull they are. V dosen't mind Ben and Rich to please him. XD I was laughing pretty hard. Poor Kev though. I hope he gets better.

I can't wait till the next chapter!

*snorts*

I couldn't actually bring myself to read the part where keving kicks down the door, I was too embarassed /for/ him!

Hey please please please times infinity continue this story it is really good

Please update soon! Good crossover!

more!

AH such a cute story!

Your a fantastic writer and think that your ideas are fantastic, i loved the fact that you kept the characters... well in character! I hope you will be releasing more chapters soon please! :op

I have clicked the subscribe to story and author button can anyone confirm that i will receive an email telling me when the chapters are updated please?

Thanks

MORE MORE MORE!GO YAOI.(IF YOU DON'T KNOW WUT THAT IS ASK ME)

I love this story! plz write more

you wrote: (("I don't understand you Kevin, all I do is try and be nice to you yet you act like the entire world revolves around you! And after what you did five years ago you'd think that you'd be a little nicer to me!"))_

Could Ben be any more of a whiny **? So in this AU, Ben hasn't forgiven Kevin and started anew. If that's not the case; why are they teammates? Ben bringing up the 'what you did to me 5 years ago' is petty, bitchy, whiny, unnatural-since they've supposedly worked through that and have been partnered for some time now. It's like you're just writing for emotional outbursts of all types with no logic behind them. And I agree with Kevin. A few hours with these 2 boys and Ben's already acting like their best 'girlfriend'. He lets Kevin hold him in the dark, locked in a hotel room. But these 2 boys-he lets touch him and make innuendo in the day of light with people around to witness and it doesn't bother him one bit. Are you working from an outline and a plot? Because this is so unlike your other stories-there's got to be something different you're doing writing this story than you did with the others. You also had Ben mention that Gwen made Kevin come and babysit him_and he resented it. I thought I read Ben begging Kevin to take him to Dakota-even though he had the option of having his cousin Ken take him. So there are also some plot/story line contradictions.

This story is a bit more juvenile than your others. You keep on mentioning Ben's 'girly' figure-the point being? Ben had access to the comics, news and internet_yet he didn't know how the bang babies came to be. He didn't even know they weren't aliens. That's impossible. Within the first 2 minutes of meeting Virgil and Richie you have Ben spilling all his secrets and giving away too much info on kevin too. That Ben would drop his alien personna in public while the real super heroes were still hiding their human personnas in costumes was kind of stupid of Ben. He should of recognized that if they thought it was important to hide identity-he should have too. You made it way to easy for Hotstreak to see him and hear his name. This story just seems a little half assed compared to the other stories you've written_even stories you've written earlier than this one. Though I like the general concept-the execution of it leaves little to be desired (so far-it's still early in the story). Sorry. I've had nothing but good things to say about almost all of your other stories. I guess it's like a box of chocolates. Sometimes you bite into one and it just tastes bad_no matter how much you like chocolate-sometimes the fillings just suck=don't taste good. Oh, forgot. Richie just looks at the watch for approx 15 seconds and discovers there's over a million dna samples inside? He also knows how to unlock more-while Ben's had it for 5 years and can't?

My two favorite shows, i love it. Lol, i'm really getting a kick out of this one, please continue, ja.

Please write more to this story thanks.

Please write more to this story thanks.

Please write more to this story thanks.