This was beautifully written!

Wow! Beautiful description. You've captured the moment perfectly. Well done! :D

Moving and poetic. Very sweet piece.

Nice. I like how you describes all that he was sensing.

You have a real knack for the short shots, and this intrigues, with the whole explosion left to question and Radek's fate as well. But it is also calming at the same time. Nice turns of phrase.