ew...lol incest is so not welcomed.

Huh, well it's certainly an interesting concept. A few typos and grammatical mistakes, but overall pretty good. I like that you took a chance with the story line, it shows guts, although I'm not -personally- buying it, I like how you described Bulma's feelings toward Vegeta. It's a completely different take on what most people consider to be an overly-passionate relationship and you show it to be almost the opposite. Overall, very interesting.

~illegiblewriter

Interesting. It would be interesting to know how Goten would react, but that's just the Goten fan that I am.

Disturbing in a fascinating sort of way...I love it!

Trunks finding out that he is Pan's uncle after wanting to date her lol. Talk about awkward.

I liked this story very much and i'm the first reviewer...yay!I really like Bulma in the series, but she's a total ** here, lol. Good job!