 Manticore1162 10/15/08 . chapter 1Extremely confusing. I was unable to make out where one conversation ended and the next started.
Abe |
 Pullmanlover 4/29/05 . chapter 1 I am crying. Do you know when the last time was that I cried over a fanfiction? Neither do I. This is insane. It's wow. How do you get people who write like this and also people who write like the other kind of people who don't know what the hell they're doing? How do you get these words in this order from the same language as created those clunking, clumsy ones in another order? It's amazing.
I'm not gonna get into the politics of this, because I'm not sure what I think myself. But you've made a wonderful expression of a problem which is sweeping this country; just like in the thing about Ainsley. Bravo. |
 rosethorn 11/23/02 . chapter 1 ohhh poor Sam and Kelly... that's so sad, nicely writtenm, though sometimes i wasn't sure if she was going to chose to have the baby or notto. |
 lunarlanding 12/13/01 . chapter 1Hauntingly beautiful. |
 Shek 12/13/01 . chapter 1 That was beautiful, I don't know what else to say other than wow. Loved it. |