mooi, het is echt een leuk verhaal.
ik wil meer lezen!

when are you going to up date the story it really good and if you sit and read though dante's chap with the song playing it put a smile on your face.seriously it is good.

Hahaa, Mr. Lonely...lol poor Dante

haha, love the whole song mocking him. LOL! I love Dante and Zhalia and u've done a really gud job with their thoughts and everything. Love this story! Hope to read more!! please don't end it.

-Phoenix

I think Cherit sould be for the next chapter? Please update again soon & thank you.

I like. I was hoping that I'd get to see your thoughts on Dante's feelings, but this is cool too. Keep up the good work.

u don't know how excited i was to see that this was update. though it's short thoughts it's pretty good. Love it. I hope there'll be more!!

-Phoenix

hey, i loved it, but is it finished. I want to read more.

Good start! You portray the characters feelings and thoughts very well =] Keep it up! I can't wait to see Dante's opinions!

really good story. Keep it up. : )