Oh yeah!

Well, that left me speechless. Anderson really went crazy and insane. His reasoning was twisted and deranged. Only this time I don't think they'll be anyone to avenge him.

Man, what an ending! Like I said in the previous chapter, you really captured the inner psyche of a killer extremely well. You're so right in the respect that the killer wouldn't see what everyone else saw - he would see his victims' deaths as something else entirely. And I must say, you put quite a unique twist on that aspect; I never would've expected it.

Are you planning on writing more Star Trek mysteries? If you are, there are some really interesting (but nasty and scary) real-life serial killer cases you could get some ideas from - killers that are sadists and torturers like Anderson. A few you could get ideas from are the cases of Ted Bundy, the Green River Killer, and Jeffrey Dahmer, but I won't post details about them (too gruesome, especially Dahmer's case). Whatever you decide to do, I'm really looking forward to reading it!

LLAP my friend,
DataLady

Loved it. McCoy is probable the most amussing character in the whole of Star Trek, next to Garak and Quark of course. He and Spock really do head their own special catagories of amusing characters. No wonder they and Kirk make such a great team.

Or just Spock and Bones when Kirk isn't around. Like in this story and a few good episodes.

Wow, great job on the last three chapters! I loved the car chase in the beginning; it really reminded me of "Starsky and Hutch." And you did an excellent job detailing Anderson's profile as a serial torturer/killer/sadist - speaking as someone who watches a lot of true-crime shows, you really made him fit a deviant murderer/torturer's profile. The instruments of torture were all correct, bodies lying in the house sure fit the case, and even Anderson's arrogance, lack of remorse, and his viewing his victims as objects were perfect. If Anderson were a real-life killer, he'd rank at Level 22 on the Scale of Evil (the highest level on the scale; I'll PM you with the details if you want me to). You could really have a career as a mystery writer, I'm telling you.

What's coming up next? Will Bones actually get to punch Mulligan's lights out when the trial's over? And what'll happen with the trial? I can't wait to find out. Keep on writing; this is freakin' awesome!

LLAP,
DataLady

OH! I LOVE THIS STORY!

THANK YOU! FINALLY!

When in a fight with an enraged Vulcan, never turn your back. Their gonna get you. Well, enraged or calm, fighting a Vulcan is a fools errend. Unless your a Klingon or Jem'Hadar, or out number them, or are genetically engineered. And yet, people still do pick fights with them. The Academy needs to teach people common sense, or graduates tend to forget it. I'm just rambling so I'll stop now.

Awesome! This is so good; the suspense is killing me! 'Bout time Bones gave Mulligan what for. I'm with Spock - I'd love to be present when Bones gives that arrogant SOB a tongue-lashing. What's gonna happen next? I can't wait to find out!

I do like your story. You've managed to keep this story DS9 serious, instead of TOS serious. TOS serious usually ends up kinda funny. Well done indeed, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

OH NO SPOCKIE POO!
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Hehe. I really like your story. NOBODY SHOULD FLAME IT CUZ ITS SO FREAKING AWESOME!! If anyone did flame your story they should go crawl in a box and die. BUT THEN AGAIN, I WOULD FLAME YOUR STORY!! JK!!
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that would be weird. And strange. 'Cause then I'd have to go crawl in a box and die.

OK This is getting out of hand. WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS TO UPDATE!! I LOVE STAR TREK AND SPOCK I WISH HE COULD LOVE BUT HE CAN'T BUT I WISH THAT HE DIDNT HAVE THE ROMANTIC RELATIONSHIP WITH UHURA IN THE MOVIE...

IT WOULD BE BETTER WITH CAPTAIN KIRK...

ALTHOUGH THAT WOULD BE GAY...

BUT I KINDA LIKE THE CONCEPT...

JUST UPDATE!

oh my god, this is exciting! poor jim and spock, this will be very hard. with getting close to jim, intensity of pain in the link has to rise. excelent chapter! please update soon.

Uh-oh... And I REALLY, REALLY Spock!

As I read this there was a Star Trek ad... how appropriate! Hehe. But I noticed that you don't always use commas where they're supposed to be, well, usually you do but this is an example:

On an impulse, he asked “Why did you kill Finnegan?”

Where you should put comma:

On an impulse, he asked, “Why did you kill Finnegan?”

You see? I am quite the grammar freak, as you may have noticed... yeah...

Hooray!
Spock is going to get tortured!
I mean poor Spock.
He is going to get tortured right?
Aside from my goosebumps, awesome story.
You know how to spin a exciting tale.
Cheerio ^__^