Excellent job with each of the character's voices. I would have liked to have heard from Doctor Donna after she gets her head straightened out, but I suppose that would have given too much away...

I especially liked your 10.5; he's different from 10 in ways that make sense and feel right to me. He's more human.

Hearing the TARDIS point of view was nice, too.

Love doctor who, and love how you incorperated the new doctor aswell.

What the fuck, this is the worst story I have ever read. Delete it! Omg now I have to bang my head a million times to get this out of my head! Thanks alot

Wow, that was brilliant. I love all the different points of view in this story and how you conveyed all the different emotions. Brilliant.

This was really good to read. I loved the way you used language - it's a style I quite like and have tried myself on occasion. The sections fitted together very well and weren't too long or too short. Hope to see more of the same maybe! :-)