Loved it

This is totally pointless. What the hell is this crap? It didn't deserve to be rated M. Hell, it wasn't even worth reading.

i love this i love this i love this yea yea more for me please

wow i never saw this coming well i wonder how this is gonna work vincent is also gonna freak but i feel worse for cloud than for tifa next chapie plz

Oh, I do hope you write more, it seems so cute of a relationship! (Poor Cloud, Vinny's got you beat, I bet!) Great story so far, curious to see where-abouts you go with it! Update soon!

o wats next

this one is nice poor drunken cloud you never really touched on how yuffie feels 4 vincent if she does just asking but anyway have fun at school lol

omg i hope cloud really isn't that fucking stupid that make me sick too (hands cloud a stiff drink*) aweful good writting though next chap plz

wow that was good poor cloud i wanted to cry too well next chap plz

omg omg omg omg i kinda im feeling tifa and cloud getting closer in the next chap ooh i hope so poor vincent he probably feel so bad or stupid

nice very nice so wat next cloud walk in again i can see his face now poor cloud i kinda feel bad 4 him

i be serious i like this a lot so good job have you decieded who tifa is gonna be with i love the twist and turns of going back and forth between men adn it also gets more plp reading it because they don't kno who she gonna be with well good job i can't wait for the next chap.P

It's really good! Very nice to read, and very in-character. I look forward to more chapters :))

hahaha bathroom moment! comedy

lol motaly wounded by yazoo lol