I read this story in the past, but I seem to have forgotten to review it. On re-reading, I can say I really enjoyed this story. You have a good grasp of character and plot. The few typos and grammatical boo-boos don't detract from your ability as a writer. I plan to read the rest of you DM stories.

Thanks for a fun read, Beth Palladino

I just read this entire story. I really enjoyed it. I hope you went ahead and wrote the sequel, because that's the next one I plan to look for.

i love the story all the carictors are grate i hop steve and his new foud love develop more plase let me no when u right more i would love to read it

This FF was great. And your first one to! Het I really loved Shane and Amanda. Keep them going to! You can't forget them. Shane is like Jesse in someway. That is throwing his 2 cent words in the conversation. LOL. Jade's parents were cool too. Hey I wonder what they will think of Steve. Can' wait for the sequal. (If it already up on the site just let me know).

Keep up the fantastic work.

PEACE OUT

Awesome job. I like how you have interwoven all the key players and added new ones to give the story twists and turns. I can't wait to get started on the sequel. Keep up the awesome job!

Wow! Can't wait to read the sequal. the character development is excellent. Great JOb.

Overall just very well done. The story was obviously well planned. Keep up the good work... off to start the sequel.

Great story! Please write the sequal soon! Please keep Jade and Shane around!

This was a great first story can't wait for more to come. I like the way it is going between Jade and Steve and Amanda and Shane. I think that all the people should remain in your next story.

Amanda and shane should continue!

Great story. Really nice to see Steve happy in a relationship for once. I enjoyed reading this. More Please- Judith

Hi, your story was fantastic and I'm looking forward to a sequel. And yes, I would like to see Amanda and Shane in it and Jade's parents too. They could meet Mark and talk about their children! lol. I really hope that sequel will be coming soon.

Excellent story! I have been gripped from beginning to end.

Good Job Loved it!

This chapter rocked! I love when the bad guys loss. It just makes the world seem like a great place for a few minutes. Can't wait for the conclusion and any other stories with Steve and Jade that may appear in the future. You're doing a great job on thi! Keep it up!