Ahaha. Great chapter. Welcome back! I love your Soul Eater stuff. Totally should've been a Black Star/TSubaki and Maka/Soul, but this will do nicely. Keep up the fine job! I like your writing of Soul. He's not so.. broody and dark. He's actually fun.

Welcome back! Glad to see you...back? Anyway! Great chapter. I have to say... I laughed rather hard at the angel bit in the manga. This one was good. Keep up the good work.

nice. Soul the closet pervert. Called it, yeah!

Oh God, 'whipped cream'? Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for that one. ;)

Awesome chapter, I love the almost palpable tension in the air...very intense and therefore, hot. Keep the chapters coming, my dear!

OHMYGOD, I love the notion of this... and I LOVE EVEN MORE WHAT YOU'VE DONE WITH IT~ Very, incredibly, well played, my friend~! It was such a joy, such a lovely thing for the eyes to look at~ *sighs in bliss*

of course she understands black star. woot
lets see what the next installment has ne. cant wait.

Haha, this is sorta strange.
I can't put into words how to describe this fic. It was both adorable and intense at the same time. Err...it was!--*shot*

Okay. NO merging words like an idiot. I'll just say I liked it very much. :'D

Ooh! Black Star's nineteen in this! (I wonder how old Tsubaki is then?..I hope Okubo posts all that info up one day.) Anyways, I ramble. I really like the idea of Black Star being super possessive over Tsubaki because he's already like that with all his other friends, so it's already spot-on for his character. Tsubaki is just a special case...heh.

Also, I'm surprised the random-date guy didn't get punched in the face, at least. xD I guess Black Star matured a bit (or maybe he knew it'd P.O. Tsubaki even more and he chose not to~)

Aw! Their first kiss! And it wasn't based on cliche "I...I like you!" crud! Hurrah! (Exclamation points!)

Okay, seriously, though. Nice job following the theme of possession and not following into the pit of extremely-overdone-writing-elements. The problem isn't the fact that everyone tells the same story, it's HOW they tell it (hope that made some sense...)

And finally, thank you for acknowledging your readers! I was pretty sure my request fell on deaf ears, being without an account and all, but SOMEBODY had to request the smut. xD (and I KNOW I'm not the only one who wants to read it! Yes, yes, perverted mind, got it.)

I can't wait to see what you contribute to the M category. x) (I also can't wait for the manga to update! Only a couple more days! :'D)

Well, sorry I just completely spammed your reviews with this...mess. Until next time!

~Bye~

Super romantic chapter here for sure. I do love Black Star and Tsubaki. Gotta love how blunt Black Star is about things.

It was fun to see Black*Star all "HEY. YOU. GET AWAY FROM HER NOW."
<3
~Pachi

I got so many butterfly-sensations all over this one. So Soul's not that strong, eh? ;D

Haha what! National Clevage Day. I liked the way you ended it :D

Ah! You're writing is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I agree with the previous comments. Your writing flows so well and it's really descriptive, which is always fun. :D You write Black StarxTsubaki extremely well...not to mention that they're always in character...thank you so much for writing thesee. (and please, continue!)

So easy and fun to read...my goodness...
The only thing is, you tease us with these fics rated T. I think you should step up and go to M, at least once...please? :D Haha I know it's a perverted thought but really, I think you'd write it with the intensity and skill it deserves (not like some other "romance" fics I've read...feh.)

Anyways, I'm done rambling. x)

Thank you for writing these and good job on all of them!

~Bye~

...I liked it.

Yay B*S/T smut! You make me ship them more :D

My favorite line was Black Star talking about her breasts deserving to be free. My face looked between xD and >D

Thank mother nature of growth spurts.

Oh, me appreciates this kind of wonderful writing incredibly much. And the smooth way your described the smutty bits of the fic made it really spice and absolutely awesome. I laughed a bit when Black Star mentally accounted what it was the call about--it did sound so much like him, to become so irritable when things don't go the way he would want them to. xD Simply priceless and absolutely glee-worthy installment! I'm looking much forward to another, since I adore your writing so much. x3