WOW!

Wow! good story!.. I would like to find out more about these mysterious tribesmen. Great job.. keep it up :)

It's like a Dances With the Wolves/ Battlestar Galactica crossover.
No, I'm just kidding... The end just sort of made me think of that.
Well, you have me hooked though I did find the story a little hard to grasp.
The whole raptor crashing thing really surprised me; I actually laughed out loud.
(I know how terrible that sounds but I mean it in the best way it can be taken.)
Thanks for writing this story! =]