great story

When's the rest coming? I wasn't very sure about the way Bella handled finding out who her dad was, but I really liked the story!

I like it! Hurry up and write more!

I can't wait 'till the next chapter!

Write more please! Now I'm addicted to your fanfics too...

I'm definately readng the next section... Who cares about homework! ;)

Another Mary Sue...

Ok, you've got me interested! Please tell me you're going to continue this? Please? Oh, and if you want more feedback, you might want to post this on Zoomway's messageboards ( .com/boards). A lot of us hang out there and write and give feedback to fanfic :)

So sad! You should keep this going! I wanna know what happens! Great work!