This is one of my favorite stories that you have written. A child of Yami Marik and Serenity is so interesting to think about. And how they both would react to it. Serenity being drawn in my him, and then having his child. Would she love it? If you ever do a follow-up to this I would love to read it!

MAH?

HOLY cheese! This was so twisted - cool stuff!

Man this is twisted - hallejulah!

I seriously think I'm going have nightmres of this one. Thanks! :)

This is going to haunt me in my dreams where I certaintly hope that Marik would have Serenity for eternity; fantastically dark.

I loved this one very much - very dark, disturbing and beyonf f**ked up. Great job!

I love this story - it is so dark, just the way I like it!

Good Lord - this was too ominous and too lyrical. Impressive!

Wow...this was very dark and very...I'm speechless...

Interesting.

TDH

When I read this story I got goosebumps just knowing that the innocent mistake that Serenity made will now and forever be her curse, for she wanted to know how it felt to be loved by this person, only to find out that he was a demon, the very demon who would not only impregnate her but would also hold her very soul in his hands. I loved this story and thanks for the dedication.. You one heck of a great writer and I love reading your stories..

This was very dark, and an interesting read. Nicely done.