yea love it more please!!

AHAHAHA, I loved how Kaiba and Anzu are bickering right in front of the High Priest Seto! That was hilarious! And I could picture the amused/confused expression on the High Priest's face. I definitely needed the laugh. And your slow update is completely forgiven, given my late review. Please update when you can! I wonder what'll happen next!
-JJ-

Looking intersting so far, can't wait to see what happens next...

Ah! Seto got told!XD Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.

good chapter ;d
hope to see more, soon!

awesome story so far
keep up the good work

Ooh this is so interesting.

TDH

Awsome, dude!
great way to send them to Ancient egypt!
can't wait for the rest!
love Q.

something tells me Kaiba won't be happy lol. Nice chapter, update soon!

You are a good writer the only thing that gets me is the misspelled words such as filed-trip. I suggest that reread before posting. Other than that...Great Job!

Oh boy... Anzu and Seto stuck in Egypt together... this is a really interesting story you have going on here, and this chapter was particularly amusing. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more! Oh, and while I'm here... I can't help asking: Are you ever going to finish "My Mother"? I desperately want to know how that story ends! But in the meanwhile, keep up the good work with this new story, and update soon!
-JJ-

I liked it.

TDH

hey there, i think your story is coming along nicely, i know what you mean about getting something to look the way you want it to on paper, im currently working on a story and its driving me nuts! keep up the good work

M...Interesting story. Can't wait to read the rest of it.

i quite like it x)
can't wait for the rest

love Q