I have to admit, slash is not my preference and would never consider McGee to be gay, or Gibbs for that matter but hear me out because I know I have been warned that it was slash but, I just had to read because you write so good, such a well-written love story. I love stories when McGee is being loved so nicely. So,I hope this is taken as a compliment, Thanks PS I'm good at scanning over the TOO slashy parts, and I have nothing against homosexuals, just not my cup of tea...I'll shut up now.

Truly enjoy this story and reread it several times. Well done and thank you.

it's really, really great

it;s great

This is great. Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us. I'm a huge fan of Gibbs/McGee and they're hard to find. Plus you did an excellant job with it. :) Many kudo's!

Rereading a wonderful story! Just seems to get better each time.

This is a wonderful story,

Thank you for sharing it.

please try to not let the "Kowak's" get you down.

I don't know if it is possible here or not but some sites give authors the option of not accepting anonymous reviews.

I am proud to log in and tell you

I really like your writing,

Ruth

oh man, I was so thankful to finally read the line where the Dr. told Gibbs that Tim survived. Poor Jethro :(

I love the story so far! I'll probably review again once I finish.

"He hoped he had enough sandpaper.

What was he thinking? Hell he hoped he had enough boat."

AWESOME lines!

Sigh, I love your stories, I love Tim & Gibbs together in whatever way.

Well done.

Well done, I say.

And bedamned all the naysayers.

You write well.

I like this and thought it was sweet. It's weird and a little creepy to vision McGee and Gibbs together but the way you wrote it was nice.

I found errors:

Gibbs's is not correct. It's Gibbs'. When there is a s at the end of a name or word, it only needs the apostrophe.

Christmas's is also not correct. It should be Christmases.

This line: "Now look whose being the fool"

That should be "Now look who is being the fool".

Whose is a possessive pronoun and would not be right in that statement.

I am sorry if this is not what you hoped for in a review but please know that I did enjoy your story.

Tony gave a small laugh and self consciously wiped the tears off his face. How embarrassing. Palmer had seen him cry.

I really loved that sentence because it's so true p Great job on this fic, thanks for sharing!

love it!

This story is really cute. You did a really great job. if it's not finished,I can't wait to read more,if it is,i'm looking through your fanfics to read more of your wonderful writing.