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QueenTigris
2008-06-07
ch 5,
abuseYour German has looked pretty good so far, but I'd just like to point out a major error.

The verb sein, or "to be" is very irregular. The present tense form "ist" is only used when the subject is in the third person. Here's a little table:

ich : bin
du : bist
er/sie/es : ist
wir : sind
ihr : seid
Sie/sie : sind

Also notice, the Nominative form of the word I/me is "ich." "Mir" is used only when the being referred to is in the Dative tense. Another table:

Nominativ/Subject : ich
Akkusativ/Direct Object : mich
Dativ/Indirect Object : mir

So you said: "Mir ist kalt."
It is corrected as: "Ich bin kalt."

Otherwise, it's generally passable.

*goes off to continue reading story*
DammmitJanet
2006-01-02
ch 4,
abusewell... snow warfare sounds fun... lol
Warrior of Forest
2005-12-15
ch 8,
abuseOi...I think your definition and my definition of "very shortly" are two entirely different things. It's been four years and two days since this was updated. Please, at least finish it.
ejqHorseLady
2005-03-04
ch 8,
abusePlease, please update this soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please.
inu-youkai 911
2004-12-03
ch 8,
abuseHey, your story is really good and its on my faves list so please update soon! The characters personalities are right on and the kurt-angst is a good thing ^-^ kurt's my fave character but i still like torturing him Lol. Well Update soon! Bye!
Manie
2004-09-06
ch 8, anon.
abuseI like it! But aren't you going to write any more? Oh, please do!
Jillie Rose
2004-09-04
ch 8,
abuseMissus, when, if ever, are you going to update this fic? It rocks!

Please!

I know it's been like, three years or something but still, please? Or tell us what happens??
YugiYamiforever
2004-07-22
ch 8, anon.
abuseYou can't leave the story hanging like that. Please continue son, i have to know what happens next
Denielle
2004-06-26
ch 8, anon.
abusePLease Update soon. This is a great story.
Beastdog
2004-05-24
ch 8,
abuseThis is such a great story! Don't worry, I like Toad too, and I think the brotherhood is ok. Your story didn't offend me at all.
buniculabuffy
2004-03-09
ch 8, anon.
abuseLove it! hurry up vith chapter 8, or else I vill send evil hordes of man-eating vampire gerbilz to your bath room, and they vill clog up the toilet! Oh, sweet Evil-ity!
Flamey
2004-02-12
ch 8, anon.
abuseThe real chapter 8 will be replacing this very shortly.
Yeah f*cking right.
starStruck272
2004-01-04
ch 7,
abuseplease please please hurry up and finish this fic!! it's really really good and i don't think i can stand it anymore if you don't update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next !!
SperryDee
2004-01-02
ch 7,
abusePlease update soon!
Kitty got claws
2003-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThats cool about the german.
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