Tweedledee and Tweedledum?

Thanks, I'm not gonna be able to think of them any other way now...

Why do I have a feeling that Oliver and Jimmy were plotting to make Lois spend a night on a farm?

I really liked how you portrayed Lois' thoughts in the story. All four people are definitely in character. I love that you included only Lois, Clark, Oliver and Jimmy in the other three lead characters of season eight have greatly annoyed me all year and I'm glad they were only mentioned. The Clois scenes were done well and I love that Jimmy and Oliver are hanging out together at Lois' apartment.

I really liked this story! It was good written and interesting. The interactions between Lois and Clark were perfectly awkward and sweet!

This is great!! I could just imagine a Clark's hair all mussed-up answering the door and seeing Lois! :) I could imagine him sleeping, looking peaceful... *sigh* those 2 REALLY need to freakin admit they love each other already! Maybe it was part of Ollie and Jimmy's plan to get her over there! ;) :) I can't wait to see what happens next with some more beautiful Clois!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)