I agree.. Carlisle was so interesting but we never got into his thoughts directly, you did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed reading it. I would love to hear more!

Oh, /really/, Sirius, it's just too bad! Twilight? Really? I mean, it's good slush, but so...slushy.

Fantastic writing. I've always thought Carlisle was wrong about changing all those people. I mean, it's a pretty selfish thing to do. But this gave me a lot of perspective. I suppose anyone would do it. I enjoyed the last few lines a lot. Very interesting.

You most certainly did him justice! I could so easily see this happening and the internal thoughts were so believable. The coin was a nice touch as well - great story!

I liked it. You gave Carlisle's decision a gravity and a voice that it didn't have in the novels.

Good job.