 FriggyEsquire 2009-09-21 . chapter 1I'm very interested in this story. The concept, while not so new to other fandoms, isn't used alot in One Piece. I'm very glad you've started this, and I'm equily glad that Usopp's the main character. |
 PDOTL 2009-04-14 . chapter 2nice set up for the true plot of the story with introducing the D. brothers. i love the brothers being together and how luffy doesnt seem all that interested in or maybe just not so serious about the family business.
haha, so with sanji's gene i guess him and zoro wont be getting along, itd be amusing to see that play out in the future. :)
also will be interested in a little zoro pov, seeing as he doesnt seem all that emotionally attached to his feeder yet.
all in all good chapter for seeing how usopp is handling his new situation. cant wait for the next chapter. until then~
~PDOTL |