Good one-shot, but wouldn't it be: The next day, the sub would leave without her. Instead of: The next day, the sub will leave without her.
-Amee Eliza

loved it :D

OH! I wanted to see this so bad in the TV show!

nice little snapshot, maldovia. Juliet's first meeting with young Ben is quite unnerving. I'm glad she had Sawyer to turn to.

I don't believe evil is born, but it's near impossible for Juliet not to put what Ben becomes on this young boy.

good work.

Whoa, man. This was fantastic! Great job!

I love this! This was very well done, and I could totally see this as being how Juliet and Sawyer got together. Great job!

aww... I really liked it...the end was surprising and awesome...

as was the rest of your fic... I was wondering how Juliet reacted when she met young Ben... He has such a sweet face that yiou really tend to forget what he grows up to be...

Thank you for sharing... I really enjoyed it...

This is excellent--very well written. It could have happened this way, and it explains why Juliet decided to stay on the island. Poor Ben.

Wow I love this! It's such a different take on why Juliet decided to stay on the island after 2 weeks. Good job!