update please!

If you're asking for readers to give you suggestions for what could happen, here's one: Souji getting attacked by angry mob of fans.

The Souji is a perplexing and mysterious animal.

It's interesting so far. I'm enjoying it.

Wow. Very nice! It's rare to see Souji/Rise fics. And this one looks promising. Keep it up.

Pretty good! Definitely some very good buildup - and I agree we've got way too few Rise/MC stories over here.

I've got one myself that I think you might like - just follow this link (it's actually a songfic series):
/s/4884823/1/Music_At_The_Corner_Of_Love_And_Multifacetedness

as i expected that photo indeed was the tip of the iceberg and now that Souji has rejected her proposal what would Rise do what was that third option her manager was ging to tell her and it's weird why would souji thank Rise about what does that mean...

ok you got my attention in here so don't dissapoint me and please continue with this story...

first of i wanna say a little piece of my mind...

¡YES ANOTHER SoujixRise FIC YES ABOUT TIME DA...!

*cough**cough* okay obsesive fanatic moment aside it has come pretty well for the first chapter the fact that you are showing how Rise's return to showbiz is something i have only saw it in your fic and if my mind is correct the drama is going to start with that photo at the end of the chapter i'm looking foward to see how this story is gonna turn so please i
beg you to continue with this Souji and Rise fics are just tofew iand they need more of them in the site

Nice start.
The ending makes me believe a paparazi was there.

yayz a rise/protagonist fic! =D interesting start to a great fic, i see its post game, very nice ^0^, please continue when ever you can i cant wait to see want happens next.

P.S. sorry if my reveiw seem to be brown nosing but i have no constructive critisism now, i promise to have some as your story grows on, again nice start =p