 rosethorn59 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Hi Your story was really good. Erestor was so angry accusing everyone of stealing his glasses. But at least it wasn't actually Estel who stole them...it was the twins. They can be so bad sometimes. But Estel didn't return them, so he was bad, too. It was sad that his brothers didn't involve him in their experiment, too. Little ones just sometimes get left out. Did he actually make the fire? Is that why Glorfindel messed up the grass; smoldering grass? Yes, I would also guess that the twins are going to get a good talking to by their Adar and Erestor. Poor them!! You should make a sequel to explain all of that. That could be really funny. Awesome story!! |