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Reviews for: Elrond & Estel: Manners
rosethorn59
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Hi Your story was really good. Erestor was so angry accusing everyone of stealing his glasses. But at least it wasn't actually Estel who stole them...it was the twins. They can be so bad sometimes. But Estel didn't return them, so he was bad, too. It was sad that his brothers didn't involve him in their experiment, too. Little ones just sometimes get left out. Did he actually make the fire? Is that why Glorfindel messed up the grass; smoldering grass? Yes, I would also guess that the twins are going to get a good talking to by their Adar and Erestor. Poor them!! You should make a sequel to explain all of that. That could be really funny. Awesome story!!
Dis Thrainsdotter
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
I can“t help giggle as I see Estel with my minds eyes. I wonder what Erestor said to Elladan and Elrohir, not to mention what Elrond said to them. O, to have been a fly on the wall in that room.
Lady Akyrial
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
Umm, Elves do not wear glasses. They do not need them, as they have exceptional sight.
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