beautiful. simply beautiful. a sequel would be cool to do.
glad i could read this.

-luna

HO HO HO! I wanna read more!! UPDATING! UPDATING! UPDATING!

update soon! i wait for more!

-luna

Beautiful chapter ten

Hey nice story you got there JuJube,now to read the rest.

BEWK

this was deep. update soon!

-luna

Chapters four to nine seem okay

I love how mature this story is. The plot line is thick. And the details are magnificant!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
=]

this was an interesting chapter. i do have to say i enjoyed it. do update soon!

-luna

Nice, we get to see how Serenity came into her powers. Do update this one, it's getting good!

-Luna

I love this chapter, when the princess finally stands up and makes her dicision to become a sailor soldier was deffintly a long awaited event!
I can't wait to find out what happenes in the next chapter!

Nice. I am looking forward to more

nice. i can't wait to see the battle. keep it up!

-luna

okay...good writing, thats for sure.
but where does your reasoning come from? i can see galaxia doing that because she is a bit of a tight hot air balloon, but did you remember she holds pride in herself for the sailor wars? she believes herself to be the ultimate sailor warrior, she never believed even when sailor moon released her that she was NOT the strongest.

as for beryl and metalia ever being good...i highly doubt it. beryl was a awful witch of the earth who fell under metalia after she fell in love with prince endymion, her love for him drove her to the point where she allowed herself to be brainwashed by metalia..and thus destroying the very place she lived. earth.

the people of outer earth did not cause any of evil beginning...and it really makes no sense of why you would write that. but it is interesting.

but in all truth i just cannot see beryl or metalia ever being good, or descending to the moon to talk with serenity, they would be killed on the spot, the lunarians are peaceful creatures but remember when beryl attacked, they fought back with whatever they had...but still lost.

continue soon because i wish to read more of this...story

Good chapter 3