it's funny! i like the idiom sweet lemons. imma use it.

it's catchy! good for a t.v. show i think. ^_^

naruto must kick sasuke's back for being defeated on MR. UN...
he will plan something in order to get revenge...
he'll also meet sakura and he will in-love at first sight...

heio ate faith...
nice chapters !
really !
demo...
i notice something...
nee-chan are for older sister, right?
but you used it for the little sister of sasuke...
well...it should be imouto...
that's all...
update soon !
XD

well i'm not an anime fan or something so i didn't have any excitement while reading this... but for a first timer... nice use of descriptive words... ahmm and well.. ahhmm nice... the story is ought 2 be interesting... i hope... but i know where it will go... kk

OMG. This one's nice. continue please. :)

aha yeahh i want to read more of this(:

heio ate faith !
nice chapter !
sasuke dancing in a shorts with a tie sure is unexpected...
haha...
update soon !
and make it longer...
XD