*epic happy* yay another KOT fanfic! XD ah well since im the first to reveiw i better make this count eh?

firstly id like to say that all the charcters show their personalitys well thankfully none of them are acting out of charcter which is always a good start next your own extra charcter is interesting and makes me want to read on really all in all its a good start bt the only negative thing i have to say about it is that you have to be carefull not to rush the plot line ok? but its awesome so far i look foreward to the next update

It turned out better than I thought! WOOT!