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Gabreya
2009-08-30 . chapter 18
Aww. That was nice of him to save her life from the assaliant though he was pretty bruised, too. And that was sweet of him to walk her back to her apartment. Though, I'm not sure if it's safe for her to be by herself. I hope they can fix that. Anyway, good chapter and the previous ones too. ;)
10093794596
2009-08-15 . chapter 17
NO!! you can't leave me like this, LOl
i love your story, I can't wait for the next chapter :)
mercuryxx
2009-08-05 . chapter 16
Ohmygoodness. Cliffhanger? Really? D:

Well, what I was going to say was that your writing is so... Intense. All you can think about is the feeling of that moment in time. I feel like I'm there :)

Kudos, I like these three little snippets. Keep on going, please-ums :3


-mercuryxx.
10093794596
2009-08-05 . chapter 16
I love this story and I can't wait for future chapters!
Brisyis
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Really liked this. Wish the last few chapters were longer, though. :(

It bugges me that this doesn't have a lot of reviews. It deserves more, really. I hate it when good stories go un-noticed. Keep up the good work. <3
mercuryxx
2009-07-23 . chapter 10
I hope you know I really like this story. Like, really really adore it.
Your chapters could be longer, if I do say so myself :)

But, do update soon, m'dear.
DanaIsis
2009-07-21 . chapter 9
read the entire thing in a day :) i really hope you continue with this wonderful story. You've really made me curious about Eira's background, i can't wait to see what is so different about her. i love the relationship building between her and Adrian, continue please :)
Gabreya
2009-06-29 . chapter 9
This is a cute chapter. It's quite obvious by now that Adrian is falling in love with Eira and vice versa.

Aww he was so nervous on asking her what he really wanted to ask her. And he normally doesn't get nervous on asking her questions. Well, cause it's business but here, it's personal and it's the fact that he's developing a crush on her. And a person get nervous when he/she talk to the person he/she like.
It's almost as if the world's smartest man and the mysterious beautiful, grey-eyed, brunette are like teenagers. Him asking Eira to go to the ball with him is like him asking her to go to the prom with him.

Love it. I hope there's more!
Gabreya
2009-06-29 . chapter 8
Oh. Flirtations going on between the phone lines I see. Yet, I'm starting to kinda understand Eira. Employees can't date their employers! Or can they?! Oh well.

Let's see what other Adrian/Eira situation is going to happen.
;)
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 7
Wow. That is like a dream. That's very romantic and lovely. Having Adrian and Eira dancing so nice and cozy is so sweet. *sigh*

Can't wait to see more of Adrian/Eira
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
Wow. An elegant invitation for Eira! I sense something...
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 5
Interesting chapter. Wow, now Adrian wants to know everything about Eira. I know she intrigues him and vice versa. That does seem odd that her parents' info is not on her file. Hmm, maybe there's an explaination.

Great chapter. :)
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 4
She feels awkward. Oh dear.
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 3
Yep. He definelty found his match!

Keep it up! ;)
Gabreya
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
I love how you have Eira such a strong, willful, and thoughtful woman with a conscience. I think Adrian has found his match.

Awesome chapter!
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