 Luiz4200 2009-11-24 . chapter 9There were crossroads after all? I though it was just about when they parted ways during Book 2. Nice touch making Sokka the one to be locked away in the cave with Zuko. Sokka injuring himself made all sense. Please update. |
 HP-anime-girl 2009-11-23 . chapter 9Really nice chapter! And you've got the relationships between the characters perfect. Great job! :)
~Kayla |
 allenterrill 2009-11-22 . chapter 9Wow, I like this story. My only critique is that there isn't enough (stress on enough, I know there is some) cause and effect changes from Katara's absence. Still, it's a good story, it's well written, and I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 Kaydreams 2009-11-22 . chapter 9Well at least Katara and Zuko are talking now. I can't wait to see what will happen next!! |
 ZUTARiAN aNG3L 2009-11-01 . chapter 8that was cool.
i loved the scenes between katara and sokka, it was so sad and sweet all at the same time. cute.
and now we know that lee is zuko.
wonder how katara feels...
cool story!!
=D |
 Kaydreams 2009-11-01 . chapter 8Wow, this chapter reveale alot! Katara met up with her brother and Zuko has been revealed! It was pretty intence to! We can already see some of the differences between Aang in the show and Aang without Katara. Poor Momo! I can't wait to see what will happen next! |
 HP-anime-girl 2009-10-29 . chapter 8I really, really liked that fight scene. Very descriptive. And when Sokka realized Kat was his sister, I totally went "Aw!" I knew that would be on of my favorite parts. Reunion scenes are just so heartfelt, don't ya think? And great job keeping everyone in character. Just brilliant. =]
~Kayla |
 Luiz4200 2009-10-29 . chapter 8Yay! Kat and Zuko finally meet the Gaang! Please update. The idea of knowing what the Gaang is up to is interesting. |
 wicca in training 2009-10-29 . chapter 8Hahahaha! I loved the scene between Zuko & Sokka, I can't wait for more! |
 K-naille 2009-10-29 . chapter 8Really nice chapter. I feared the way you would write the Sokka-finds-Katara scene, but you managed it pretty well. |
 ArrayePL 2009-10-28 . chapter 8Very nice chapter. They finally found each other. Look forward to read more about why Zuko changed. Is it about lack of Iroh around? |
 Kaydreams 2009-10-19 . chapter 7Well that was unexspected! I can't believe Zuko thought he could beat Toph! lol! Katara REALLY needs to learn how to properly water bend...Toph now know who Zuko is...interesting...I wonder how this will effect everything.. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Please update soon! |
 HP-anime-girl 2009-10-18 . chapter 7Wow, really great action scene. And I can't wait to see how Sokka reacts to Katara. I'm really loving this story!
~Kayla |
 Vimuku 2009-10-17 . chapter 7Ah, I'm so sorry i didnt get the beta to you in time >_<
Things have been srsly hectic
aside from a few minor errors here and there, i think its pretty decent, and i'm loving where the plot it going...
although i think toph should've just crushed azula instead of just trapping her :P |
 ZUTARiAN aNG3L 2009-10-17 . chapter 7oh my gosh!!
that was so freaking cool.
toph knows that lee is zuko.
the banished prince...katara doesn't have a clue.
wonder how she'll act when she figures out he lied to her...?
you have to update now, because i have to know what happens!!
they were getting so close, they had their own little moment..and now it's all going to be gone.
cool chapter. nice keeping the characters in character. =] |