Thanks Bob! A little corny at the end with the wheely thing but a good ending. Is the 'mark my words' about finding Trudy's killer a fourth wall hint? From where?

Again thanks!

Wonderful story! Great ending to a great series of stories. Loved it when Adrian and Jack Jr. said "We're rounding up." at the same time. :D Again, great story.

it's sad you've ended this story already but I'm also happy, that were great 5 years (for me only 3 and a half) but you still can write at least one more story...in November is end of the season and Monk will solve Trudy's murder. We'll finally know who and why...you could make an alternative ending to this story you've already make...like who killed and why and did Tommy lives with Monk or he got a new family...etc...

It would be great...but it'll be your choice

This chapter is great...especially the end... I can picture Monk on the motorcyckle...Awesome job...

Ha! One of my suspects was Jared and/or Max and it turned out it's Jared but I didn't completely suspect Atherton, which is a surprise to me. Can't wait for the next chapter...please update a.s.a.p

Apparently he's not as young as I thought. I had a small hunch it could be him but again the age. His violence should have given him away. Wow! Great chapter!

Hurray it was a dream! You're a tricky one, I'll give you that! I love you again Bobby! Write on again!

YAY! It was only a dream :)

Now I wasn't expecting THAT! It was all a dream! Just a bad dream!...now I'm lost...if not Natalie then who?

You've got me more curious please update a.s.a.p

I was hoping you weren't going to choose Natalie as the one. I'm not terribly happy about that and killing Adrian. Thus the end of the road. Is your portrayal of Natalie an indication of how much you hate her thus revealing that you are a die hard Sharona fan?

I'll have to say I didn't enjoy this chapter. Surprising twist though.

My list of the suspects was simple. Natalie was #6 First was Stott and Karen then Monk Sr. Ambrose and Jack Jr. (before Monk family were Davenports but after they died I strike off them from the list) and then was Natalie. The last I'd suspected was Archbishop Fitzwater, Turcotte, Harold, Gail, Sharona...and so on...I've never suspected the kids...

So Julie's dead, Jonathan, Stottlemeyer...and Monk...whose next?

please update a.s.a.p the waiting is killing me inside...this story is so great

Wow. You're writing was wonderful, very descriptive. I just realy wish it wasn't Natalie. :(

sweet. I can picture Monk walking with sleeping Tommy...

Why Monk checked when Ambrose went for everyone else and the spare cellphone? and why did he hide the paper behing his back? I think Ambrose or Jack sr. and jr. has something to do with this...Leland and/or Karen may have something to do with this also...

But if it is Monk's father and his two (one and half actually) brothers then...it's big...scary big...

I still don't have an idea what the motive might be for all of this...update a.s.a.p...waiting is killing me inside!

What is 'It'? This is like bungie jumping. Not that I've had personal experience at it but this is impossible to figure out who did it. I still say Karen, but why would he need to check the visitor's log? He already knows she was there.

Great story flow and what a perfect place to stop! You're killin' me here!

Monk and Tommy have a better relationship now...I hope it'll stay that way. Natalie's parents were acting suspicious but they died so they're out of the main suspects...How Natalie and Jonathan and mostly Julie, will react to their sudden death? Please update A.S.A.P

P.S How many more chapters there will be?

This surly is rough on the emotions!