This is such an excellent story. You transition so well between lively, humourous moments and the deep, thoughtful, loving ones. I think now was the perfect time to go on hiatus ...

wow. your story is truely amazing! you are such a talented writer!! to catch all this emotion and put it into words is unbelievable!! you are truly talented and i really look foreward to reading more of your work! plz plz,PLZ!! update this soon!

Hey mrs!

I feel very strange reviewing this right now because i'm speaking to at this very moment. Hm...

Anyway - Fantabulous! As usual, Proud Dad Hunter is extemely sweet and we need to see more him please!

I can't berate your writer's block since I'm suffering also (meh) so any shouting would be hypocritical, but please get it sorted soon. I would like more!

Love,
Girly

So sweat! I liked it! Please continue!
~*~HGS~*~

I love your story!! Please find your way around the writer's block! When I get stumped, I just throw things around in my head, options that could happen, and something pops up! I read other stories and got descriptive words, adjectives or verbs, that I could use and that helped me form an idea by putting those words together and I got around a particularly stubborn block. (It wasn't plajerism because I used single words from differnet stories like 'enveloped' or 'causual ease') Just trying to help! Please hurry with your writing! I'm dying for more!
~*~HGS~*~

i thought this was really good, it follows on really well from the ending of NC and i just thought it was great, keep writing!

M.

Absolutly love the story so far. Keep up the good work and i am so looking forward to reading some more.

Some ideas i have if you're interesed is somewhere in the story Morgan, Hunter, Moria, Ian and maybe Alwyn, Killian and the rest of the Characters have to come together to fight a great evil that has come for Ian, That has to do with his Dad and his coven or something like that. It would make the story very interesting but please do keep up the loveing stuff between the couples course its really good.

Can't wait to read what comes, Im a huge Fan of Wicca and you are doing one damn good job, keep it up... :-)

really enjoying it so far!

yeah, great job!, but i think this fic needs to be rated-M, dontcha think?

um, is any of this in Moira's POV? just curious, you know, cuz im a teenager, so i relate better to her. anyway, great job with your writing! i really like it!! okay, i'm gonna shut up now and go read more!

aw! so, so ,so sweet! She called him Da! OMIGOD!! great writing! i love it so far!! great job!!

Fabulous as usual, but I have a little typically me sticking point...

PANTS are underwear that you put on under TROUSERS.

sorry but that always really annoys me.

Update soon please!

love
m

This is great. update. we want more! *stomps around like a child then smiles like butter wouldn't melt* lol

I have been to that market, there is a bloody lot of fish!

Anyhoo... lovely! lovely! lovely! I am anticipating lots of grumpy pregnant Morgan though, poor Hunter. tee hee!

Love
m.

Ahh - Hangovers, the bain of my life. Well actually it's student night with tequila shots for a £1 that is the bain of my life.

Anyway - great story keep it up! You know I love it!