HAHAHA... Oh very nice work on this. Bloody brilliant. Keep at it.

Agreed with Kurenai-san down there, but nonetheless it was short and sweet and enjoyable; now I wonder where Kyon learned to swear like that hehe...

Yuki looked up. “Sh*t afternoon, Asahina-san. The motherf*cking piece of crap book is f*cking good.”

This line had me laughing so hard I almost cried.

I didn't dare laugh so loud 'cus my elder brother was scolding my younger brother XD And I was in the living room. XD I LOVED IT!

I think some part of me just died from laughting so hard...

omg! amazing! that made me laugh so hard!

bravo!

Well, I believe you could've pulled it off a little better by writing in more detail, but you still managed to make me laugh, so I'll let it drop.

Good job and write more!

Oh, that was funny lmao

Wow...this was hilarious!

I guess that teaches Kyon to not teach aliens how to swear..xD

Aren't you the Seira/Hippo fan from the Mermaid Melody fics? :-)

Jeez, Kyon has to be a little more down...xD

This SO should have happened on the show... XD