 Puppylover06 2009-10-01 . chapter 2 Uh oh... |
 Puppylover06 2009-10-01 . chapter 1 Scarey! I want my mommy! |
 Puppylover06 2009-10-01 . chapter 1 Scarey! I want my mommy! |
 SnowsongIsAJaypawFan 2009-08-16 . chapter 1nice story. |
 SnowsongIsAJaypawFan 2009-08-15 . chapter 2dun dun DUN! |
 Taryn Streambattle 2009-06-28 . chapter 2MORE! |
 voodooqueen126 2009-04-19 . chapter 2Well done! |
 voodooqueen126 2009-03-29 . chapter 1I like the way you have captured Ax's personality. |
 PowerPen 2009-03-28 . chapter 1I like Ax's narration in this chapter, especially when he feels the need to give the definition the word 'cousin'. |
 Quillian 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Hm, a new story? Cool! (I also like how Ax is the narrator; I liked him during the series...) |