 ALucky13 1/26/06 . chapter 1Wow that was great. Just the paragraphs were a little too long, and that last sentence was cut short. I've always liked Hatori and it was refreshing reading a story about him. |
 litoriceball 1/11/03 . chapter 1HEY! lol first off, I want to thank you for reviewing "Sweet Dream" _
Anyways.. This is the first Hatori x Kana fic I've read and it's really good for ur very first story. You just have some grammar mistakes, but nothing that bad. Enjoyed reading it :)
Please review my fic when I update it again if you have the time. _ Anyways, ja ne!
Quynhiee |
 Takiko 5/16/02 . chapter 1This is really very sweet. Hatori and Kana...sighs.. |
 mao of Nekotekken surprise surprise hasn't signed in 12/26/01 . chapter 1 hmm...Ohimesamaaaaa! Write me a YukiXKyou one onegai shimasu! *Whines and gives you her best puppydog-I mean, kitty kat eyes* Pweese! |
 Omikun 12/20/01 . chapter 1it's a good idea to have written a fic about Hatori's back into a human when he first transformed in front of Kana! and it was a cute scene too! i really liked it! gambarre and write more! _ |
 Articuno2000 12/15/01 . chapter 1Good fic! ;_; Episode 8 and Hatori's story was so sad... *cries* Evil Akito! |
 Ferrum 12/15/01 . chapter 1AGGGGGHHHH! ::pulling her hairs:: A Hatori fic! And his romance with Kana! This is the one I've been waiting for! I'm starting to freak out the hell if after I watched that episode. Well, very well done and very good for your first fanfic. A little bit of mistakes. You can find a betareader for that. But in general, you're great! |
 passing through 12/14/01 . chapter 1 wai! that's the first Hatori fic i've read O
I was beginning to feel that i'm the only one that adores him ; Anyways i really loved that episode (shed a few tears) damn! we need more Hatori fics ! |