Wow, that was one of the most well-written fanfictions I have ever read, seriously. You rock!

I LOVE THIS!

I really, really, really, LOVE this. I love these two together and you portray them so well!

I liked it. Your writting style was easy to read and it was quite a lovely story. I just wish there was more. :)

I love these two here. Eragon being all teary-eyed and Murtagh trying to convince himself that Eragon's better off without him... Those lugheads are so in love. :D

BRILLIANT! I love this story. This is so beautiful that I could cry. Write a honeymoon sequel. Please? I'll write anything you want. I'll do anything. For you ma'am, anything. Cause' I'd do anything, for you. Sorry, random Oliver reference. Please write again?

i love it very well written and like befor i love this pairing

love it i have allways loved this pairing

this was a very good story. i liked it.

-TruancyCity

:)

YAY! u finally finished it! i love this story! kisses, hugs, and cookies to you for finishing it!

This was written well, and it was so sweet! I liked the interactions between Eragon and Murtagh. :3 Thank you, you just made my day a little bit brighter!

wait..KISSING?

i thought they were brothers!

are they GAY?

aw

that's so cute

it's like eragon's a smaller brother and murtagh is the older brother

and eragon's all innocent learning how to read

i LOVE this

well done :D and i bet he said yes a few more times in that relationship if you no what i mean

This was so adorable cute! I loved it, it was so original and heartfelt and believable and CUTE! You're a wonderful writer ;D