Reviews for Evangelion: Bitter Testament

Reviews For: Evangelion: Bitter Testament

urgazhi 2006-01-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseI think you should start this story back up again, it has alot of potential i think :) so PLEASE start it up again, (I had a simmilar idea fror a eva story before, but i pritty much know that i cant write to save my behind, so please continue?)
Name: 2004-12-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseVery nice. It had real potential. But I suppose that if you haven't updated in three years, you aren't going to update.
Adam 2002-10-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseVery nice, very dark and above all. Shinji is one evil **, I like, I like.
T.M.M.S 2002-08-24 ch 2,	abuseThis is a very good story I hope you have the next chapter up soon!!!
Draculthemad 2001-12-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseGreat Story! Good to see more stuff from an old-school Eva writer! As for Shinji being an ACC, I thought it was fairly obvious Gendo had been feeding him misinformation in order to make him a more motivated pilot... Its as much as stated that hes really Ikari Shinji, but Gendo is lying to him.
joedoebell 2001-12-17 ch 1,	abuseSo he's got a different family, and a different personality. Though he has the same first name, doesn't that make him an ACC anyway? He also has some serious smuggness going on. You tried to explain it away by having him be "informed" about things before they happen, but I'm not sure that's good enough. Reading about life and living it are two different things. He may very well have read about the angels (somehow, I guess it would be theory, becaue I doubt he read about the 1st or the 2nd even with a hacker for a friend he's not going to get to the highest level of clearance) but seeing the 10-12 story tall monster destroying aircraft and slamming through the city is liable to make a lot more of an impact on you. Please don't forget to make this guy human, with failings. I really don't consider him to be Shinji, as such I am a little more disinterested than I normally would be. This is written very well though, your spelling and grammar are damn good!:) There was only one sentence I dislike: "Aircraft popped up from nowhere, surrounding it like gnats--and then getting swatted down like gnats, by this giant." "Popping" seems a bit of a wierd word to use for aircraft, and there is no need to say "gnats" twice. And aren't the aircraft a little big in comparison to the angel for a metaphor association gnats and giants? "This"? You mean "the"? I am a little intrigued about what seems to be a revenge story on the part of this character, so I would read the second chapter. Please keep writing, but please fix that sentence, and please don't make this guy too perfect or too unimpressed with everything.
SxStrngSamurai13 2001-12-14 ch 1,	abuseI like it. I'm glad to see Andrew Huang writing again. I can't wait for more chapters to come out.
Cadriel 2001-12-14 ch 1,	abuseWow. That's quite a start. Emphasis thus far on the different character of Shinji. I'm not sure I like him, but we'll see as the series goes on. I'm interested in seeing what will become of the series, and I like the reactions of the different characters as it goes. Writing is impeccable, as is usual--this should be the standard for FFn. Glad to see that somebody here is doing good fics. :-)
Virus 2001-12-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseNot bad, this AU is quite good but it has its down sides. First off the Izaki bit, not too sure about that but I'm guessing something good. Secondly this fic went quite fast, but thats probably because I liked it so much. Spellings good, grammar is much better than what I've seen in the past few weeks(thank god!). Shinji seems a bit on the Asuka side, very determined, very stupid/fearless(throwing rocks at an angel doesn't do much to it but I'm suuure he knew that). He also hacked into NERV, need I remind you NERV is a SECRET orginization that no one has ever heard of outside tokyo 3 AFTER the first angel attacks. But I'm suure you knew that too. Try giving more reason to things as they come to light next time and it should be better.
Shikyo1 2001-12-13 ch 1,	abusehmmm...its...I like it. It was interesting seeingthis new Shinji witha backbone. I think its better than the beep ive been writing. Well, keep up the good work. Im excited to read more of it.
Curtiss R Nelson 2001-12-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood to see more of your writing, Andrew! Good beginning. At first I thought Izaki was a misspelling, but now I see it was not. Interesting leads, waiting to see more to see how the story turns out. Keep writing, Curtiss R. Nelson

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