 LilyRosetheDreamer 2009-06-08 . chapter 2I don't normally like yaoi but this is pretty good! I t seems like Shadow is going to be a Maria/Tohru type of person! Kind, gentle and soft! By the way, if you don't know who Tohru is, type Fruits Basket into google. Bye bye! |
 WolfKitty 2009-05-04 . chapter 2eep! you updated! ooh, Shadow finally appears! :D i really like the tense air you've put between Sonic and Shadow XD it adds to the atmosphere! can't wait for the next chap :3 |
 Lack of Existence 2009-04-29 . chapter 2Awesome chapter!
I loved the beginning, with Sonic counting down. XD Ah, Kaiba is awesome.
...Holy crap Shadow smiled -collapses- And since you exploded in the author's note, does that mean I have to clean it up? -mutters discontentedly-
I wonder when the lady is going to ban Sonic from the chao garden... hm. |
 WolfKitty 2009-04-25 . chapter 1guah, it's good so far :3 i want more! :D update soon! |
 Lack of Existence 2009-04-13 . chapter 1This story = win. :3 Update soon?
Sonic's little chao amuses me to no end, and the episode with the entire exchange about shredding with underground homies and coming back a hero made me laugh.
And... Knuckles is funny. XD Same with Amy. Awesome story. Awesome. 8D I would give you con-crit, but... I suck at that. Really. |
 You can run but you can't hide 2009-04-10 . chapter 1Please update! |
 Trauts 2009-03-28 . chapter 1Hey! This is a good...no...a great story! I cannot understand why no-one else has reviewed this!
I will admit I'm not a fan of the "alternate-reality" fics, but this is very well written and you've obviously put alot of work into it.
Just a TENY tiny little factor which you will be surprised how much it affects the amount of people who read this: Change the title to "Acceleration" rather than "acceleration". I've found I'm more attracted to read stories with grammaticaly correct (Capital letters) summaries and titles.
But anyway, this is both hilarious and well thought-out. I'm reviewing this story because it DESERVES reviews.
Since I'm not normally a true reader of these types of stories, I won't be reviewing every chapter, but I will put this story on Alert, since you've managed to catch my interest.
I still hope to see more, and good work on this fic!
Until next time, Farewell!
P.S. I think I'll check out your other Sonadow, though again I suggest giving the title a capital letter. That strange little factor that changes how many read a story. |