"NO ACHIEVEMENT FOR YOU, SUCKER!" and "We just got served." parts made me LMAO. xD

Darn well written fic, you should totally continue writing more of teh SIAFM4D.+1.

Again! you made me laugh so hard! but not to hard because im reading this in a library =3

MY GOD! XD XD!

I love the WTF Boom reference.

pfft

Sometime's I wonder how humanity gets all these crazy, but funny idea's from

Bravo, loved it, especially the break-dancing part, and the little zombie kids part

my favorite part was when Louis said
“Damn, We just got served.” lol

CHEESE IT. lol

Full of win. I laughed through the whole thing.

I like this story! I laughed- a lot!

ROFL! that was the funniest story ive read in a LONG time! you have a great talent, i lvoed the whole thing! especially the ending 'SUP **-- I'M A ** TANK!" i was lmao! tis whole story gets an A+, no bad parts!

HA! Funny. You win.

lol lol, lol lol.

You pwn life. I love you

I feel sorry for them XD. Tank in a closet. But shouldn't Bill be dead until the next bit? Because, you can't revive them in closets in versus...

SUP **-- I'M A ** TANK
HAHAHHAHAHHAHA
HAH! NO ACHIEVEMENT FOR YOU, SUCKER!
HAHHAHAH i LOVE this storie, like you don't even know.
This is going to my favourites. :]]