Wow just read this. You are an amazing writer you've pulled me into your story so completely. Please continue this! x

This is one of the fluffiest stories ever, and it still has a plot! Excellent job, but sometimes you leave out a word or two. I love your author's notes, they really add a personal touch.
My only big problem is that there are so many kissing scenes that it dilutes the love between Morgan and Hunter and makes it seem like a purely physical love, which we all know it isn't. Other than that, it's an excellent job, and I can't wait to see what happens with Helen and Colm!

Hi :D ... i would start with sorry but i have decides im boycotting apoliguies ... so .. je suis desole for your wait :D

Aw ... grumpy Hunter is so cute
And a hilly breakfast is a genuis idea ... we should of used that to justify last nights phish food and pizza debacle :D:D
I feel very sorry for Killian in his tree house ... yet also slightly jelous .. i never had a tree house .. a den to end all dens yes .. but a tree house ?!
Your bit about adorible crows feet was slighlty ridiculous but im sure Morgan can get away with that .. being in love with Hunter and all... However i do beg that you shoot me if I ever get that ridiculous ?!?!?!?!

Yeah so I loved it ,, but that was a given .. update soon coz u no u wanna ?!

Shmifel .. OMG Callum came out with Schmiffle this morning when i refused to pour him a bowl of cereal .. I didnt know if I wanted to laugh or strangle him ... (so I did Both :D:D:D)

xxh

aww, so cute! ^^
but seriously, u have too many HUGE paragraphs.
u should at least seperate the dialogue into seperate paragraphs.
all in all, it was beautiful.
and the ending, PERFECT!

love the story

:D!

after five long hours after you send me off to bed (honestly, its disgusting the way we work, we're not even in the same country and yet we have no problem whatsoever to bark orders at each other... and the other person actually listens! well, sometimes anyway) I decided to give up on sleep and found, to my delight, the new chapter! WHOOHOO!!

You know I'm now impatiently bouncing up and down for the next chapter and that I probably wont shut up about it until you threaten to not write anything at all if I keep acting like a five year!!

I now feel bad about my own lack of updating... I will go and try to force something out of my fingers now.

Love,
Emma

Bravo Bravo! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. :)

Just thought i'd say it as i know people generally like feedback that i thought this was brilliant, thought this ending was great and could read it over.

-keep writing,

M

So far the story is a winner.. I have to say I didn't care for NIGHT CHILD either, and that your interpretation is much better.. Keep up the good work and update again soon!

awesome! im so glad SOMEONE else wasn't happy with night's child!! and the part where Hunter punched colm was my favorite. *sigh* i so wish hunter was real. are you going to continue it!?!? please do! oh, and why is it titled the sweet smell of oranges? or are we going to find out later?

well, you already know what I think but I'll say it again

Its wonderful! a true piece of art! A masterpiece!

Who was the genius that came up with the muggle-part? Was she dutch? I'd might know her lol

Wonderful dear, cant wait for your next chapter

Love,
Emma

thank you xox

well you already know what I think about the chapter but I shall repeat it; it's bloody brilliant!

Love,
Twinkle

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"Yes" I love it! Hunter is a classic!