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chrissyjoy 10/8/09 . chapter 8
oh my! definitely curious now about what Jenny might do/what Jethro would let her do...another story? please? ;)
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 8
Wow, wasn't expecting that from Jen!

Gonna try reverse psychology now - you can't write another story where Jen follows through on her promise. Your loyal readers do not want to read whatever your Muse might come up with for that. So, don't think about a sequel. We don't need it.
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 7
Okay, I nearly choked on this chapter, I was laughing so hard!

The whole camel thing was hilarious caught me totally by surprise. My sympathies with Tony!

This chapter was really well done, with Abby's POV.

"For a split second she wondered if Gibbs had ever cried from a spanking, before shoving that thought deep into the recesses of her brain; there was no way she was letting that image out again."

Come on, that has to be a sequel for sure!
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 6
LOL! Trust Timmy to work out the science of the spanking!

Nice touch with the hug from Gibbs.
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 5
Loved the way you show us Gibbs side of things with this chapter, especially the reference to Kelly. You certainly got across the father/kids relationship that he has with the three of them.
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 4
Oh the poor kids! Ha! Tim in the corner. Get used to it McGee!

That car journey must have been hell!
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 3
Oh. My. God! They are dead!
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 2
Oh crap, what the hell have they got planned. And now they are roping poor McGee in on it.

I think I might need to get someone to access the next chapter for me...I'm too scared to look!
PaperHat 4/11/09 . chapter 1
NO! NO! NO! Tony is crazy! Nothing ever good came of pranking Gibbs!
achillies-eel 4/7/09 . chapter 8
A movie? Oh my, Director; I don't think you quite realize what you've just gotten yourself into... :D

I MISSED THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS! I've been missing all this wonderful updates just because I've been too lazy to open my email box. :(

Loved both chapters, anyway! I love that Tony shared a bit of his childhood; trust him to try to 'fix' a nativity scene!

Abby is such a dear! I can totally see her sympathizing with Tim and Tony and thinking that hearing them getting punished was about as bad as getting punished herself! :D

Amazing fic, as always!
Keydazy 4/6/09 . chapter 8
Haha! I love Jenny trying to be the disciplinarian but smiling on the inside. Also like the kids reaction to her threat. I'm a little confused by the ending of this chapter. Will this be cleared up in the next? There will be another chapter, right? I hope I can see Tony's POV.
Visitkarte 4/6/09 . chapter 8
LOL! About a movie... Yess, that's how I call that! ;-)
SA3466996 4/6/09 . chapter 8
Nice ending. Jen is full of surprises.
Tragicpoetry1 4/6/09 . chapter 8
Ha ha ha i love it!
anbargal 4/6/09 . chapter 8
Another great part in your NCIS series, and I enjoyed this one too. Was a good idea, Tony, Abby and especially Mcgee should realize by now that they seem to never work! But glad they don't as this is what makes the stories fun.
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